Loose sentence

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A loose sentence (also called a cumulative sentence) is a type of sentence in which the main idea (independent clause) is elaborated by the successive addition of modifying clauses or phrases.

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Construction

It adds modifying elements after the subject, complement, and verb.

Effect

Loose sentences may make a work seem informal, relaxed, and conversational. However, according to Strunk and White's The Elements of Style (2000), a succession of loose sentences, especially those of two clauses, is to be avoided because of "mechanical symmetry and sing-song". [1]

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Stunk and White, in The Elements of Style believe one should recast enough of them to remove the monotony, replacing them by simple sentences, by sentences of two clauses joined by a semicolon, by periodic sentences of two clauses, by sentences, loose or periodic, of three clauses—whichever best represent the real relations of the thought. [2]

For example, if the writer wanted to rewrite the above examples, he could write:

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References

  1. "Elements of Style". www.tulane.edu. Archived from the original on 2016-03-06. Retrieved 2016-02-29.
  2. Strunk Jr., William (July 28, 2009). The Elements of Style. W L C. ISBN   978-1557427281.