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A loose sentence (also called a cumulative sentence) is a type of sentence in which the main idea (independent clause) is elaborated by the successive addition of modifying clauses or phrases.

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Construction

It adds modifying elements after the subject, complement, and verb.

Effect

Loose sentences may make a work seem informal, relaxed, and conversational. However, according to Strunk and White's The Elements of Style (2000), a succession of loose sentences, especially those of two clauses, is to be avoided because of "mechanical symmetry and sing-song". [1]

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Writers should recast enough of them to remove the monotony, replacing them by simple sentences, by sentences of two clauses joined by a semicolon, by periodic sentences of two clauses, by sentences, loose or periodic, of three clauses—whichever best represent the real relations of the thought. [2]

For example, if the writer wanted to rewrite the above examples he could write:

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References

  1. "Elements of Style". www.tulane.edu. Archived from the original on 2016-03-06. Retrieved 2016-02-29.
  2. Strunk Jr., William (July 28, 2009). The Elements of Style. W L C. ISBN   978-1557427281.