Men in Aida

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Men in Aida
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Author David Melnick
Subjecthomophonic translation of ancient Greek into English
PublisherTuumba Press
Publication date
1983
Publication placeUnited States
Published in English
1983
OCLC 10763257

Men in Aida [1] is a homophonic translation of Book One of Homer's Iliad into a farcical bathhouse scenario, perhaps alluding to the homoerotic aspects of ancient Greek culture. [2] It was written by the language poet David Melnick and is an example of poetic postmodernism. In 2015, all three books of the Iliad translated by Melnick were published by the independent publishing house Uitgeverij under the title Men in Aïda. [3]

It opens:

Men in Aida, they appeal, eh? A day, O Achilles.
Allow men in, emery Achaians. All gay ethic, eh?
Paul asked if team mousse suck, as Aida, pro, yaps in.

Corresponding to the Greek:

μῆνιν ἄειδε θεὰ Πηληϊάδεω Ἀχιλῆος
οὐλομένην, ἣ μυρί᾽ Ἀχαιοῖς ἄλγε᾽ ἔθηκε,
πολλὰς δ᾽ ἰφθίμους ψυχὰς Ἄϊδι προΐαψεν

Transliterated:

mēnin aeide theā pēlēiadeō Akhilēos
oulomenēn, he mūri' Akhaiois alge' ethēke,
pollās d' iphthīmous psukhas Aidi proiapsen

Literal translation: [4]

The wrath sing, goddess, of Peleus' son, Achilles,
that destructive wrath which brought countless woes upon the Achaeans,
and sent forth to Hades many valiant souls

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References

  1. Melnick, David (1983). Men in Aida. Tuumba. Vol. 47. Berkeley, California: Tuumba Press. OCLC   13478109.
  2. Perelman, Bob (28 July 1996). The marginalization of poetry: language writing and literary history (book). Princeton, New Jersey: Princeton University Press. p. 24. ISBN   978-0-691-02138-6. OCLC   185423402 . Retrieved 24 December 2009.
  3. Melnick, David (2015). Men in Aïda. The Hague & Tirana: Uitgeverij. ISBN   9789491914041.
  4. Homer, trans. A.T. Murray, The Iliad, Loeb Classical Library, 1924. at Perseus